Excerptem Clare Cummings Literary Devices

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The poem begins with an end-stopped line. The next four sentences are end-stopped lines, as well. These sentences end with periods; when ending a sentence with a period, Cummings emphasizes the sentence and makes the reader reflect on what he or she has read. Use of periods is uncommon for Cummings, who tends to use unique punctuation at seemingly random times. These sentences appear to be straightforward, displaying how Cummings wants the diction to speak rather than the punctuation. The speaker goes on to say, “i like what it does, / i like its hows” (Cumming l. 4-5). By using a comma to separate two independent clauses, Cummings breaks grammar rules. When reading the line, the reader does not stop and reflect after the first clause, but rather, …show more content…

Commas are placed throughout the poem to make the reader pause, stimulating the way a person would pause when discovering someone’s body for the first time. Hyphens are also used in the poem. The hyphens are not accompanied by spaces, reiterating the hurriedness that Cummings wants to portray. By connecting the words trembling, firm, and smooth with a hyphen, these characteristics are connected, adding layers to his diction (since trembling and firm are opposing descriptions). Additionally, when the speaker says, “what-is-it” (Cummings l. 11), the hyphens make the phrase sound like one word which makes the reader say it quickly. Saying things quickly is a result of being excited, which is the emotion that the speaker feels. After the speaker discovers the “over parting flesh” (Cummings l. 12), there is an ellipse. Ellipses are usually used when a person takes an extended pause or loses his or her train of thought. In this instance, the speaker is mesmerized by the “parting flesh” of the woman; so much so that he cannot speak

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