Elegy For Jane By Theodore Roethke

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In "Elegy for Jane", a poem by Theodore Roethke, the speaker communicates his intimate attitude towards his former student in an elegy. The speaker shows these emotions and feelings through the use of the figurative language and the use and repetition of “my.”
The beginning of the poem describes Jane's character from the speakers' intimate point of view. It seems that the speaker was close to his student. He speaks of her vitality and exuberance, and recalls her qualities such as her hair, smile, and presence. “I remember the neckcurls, limp and damp as tendrils,” here, the speaker using a simile to compare Jane’s hair to tendrils, a plant known for its curls and climbing. Jane’s love for singing is mentioned as she is compared to a wren, “A wren, happy,...Her song trembling the twigs and small branches.” The speaker talks of how the “syllables leaped for her,” and how she “balanced in the delight of her thought,” emphasizing her liveliness. He also describes the power that Jane’s voice has, as normally when leaves blow, they make a cold, frigid whisper, but the whispers of the leaves “turned to kissing” when Jane sang. The speaker also implies how Jane can make something unappealing, such as mold, sing with her, “the mould sang in the bleached valleys under the rose.” This, however, unfortunately foreshadows her death. …show more content…

"My" is a form of ownership and possessiveness as he clings to her. He calls her, “my sparrow,” “my maimed darling,” “my skittery pigeon,” but most importantly of all, “my love.” After Jane’s death, the speaker says he stands over her grave and “speak[s] the words of … [his] love” to her. He tells her of his love, but he says he has no right to because he isn't her lover or her father. This usage of “my” proves the intimate attitude the speaker has towards Jane, as he has much love and affection for

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