Culper Spy Ring Essay

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INTRODUCTION
I. Attention-Getter: When most of us think of espionage, we tend to think of classic fictional characters such as James Bond.
II. Central Idea: The Culper Spy Ring and its unique members played a key role in deciding the final outcome of the American Revolution and, according to Brian Kilmeade, coauthor of George Washington’s Secret Six, may have been able to almost single-handedly change the course of the entire war. (Verbal Citation)
III. Motivator: The history of the Culper Spy Ring is fascinating, its story reading almost like a novel too impossible to be true.
IV. Credibility: I have been reading about the Culper Spy Ring since I was a little girl, and even have portions of the codebook memorized. …show more content…

Townsend worked as a reporter and was responsible for gathering information within the city.

(Internal Transition: We’ve gone over four of the Culper Spy Ring’s key members, so we can now delve into one of its major achievements.

III. Although the Culper Spy Ring was extremely successful and accomplished many impossible tasks, the spy ring’s protection of West Point and exposition of Benedict Arnold’s traitorous nature was easily one of its most important achievements. A. The spy ring collected intelligence that pointed to a plot between Major John Andre, British General Henry Clinton’s chief intelligence officer, and Benedict Arnold that would result in the colonists losing West Point to the British. This would probably have crippled the colonists. B. Thanks to the Culper Spy Ring’s information, Andre was intercepted before he made it to West Point, and Benedict Arnold was exposed as a traitor. West Point was kept safe and remained a major tactical advantage.

(Transition: We have completed this brief overview of the Culper Spy Ring’s origins, members, and a major achievement; let us review.)
CONCLUSION
I. Summary: In conclusion, the Culper Spy Ring was a unique part of the American …show more content…

II. Thesis Re-statement: The Culper Spy Ring and its unique members played a key role in deciding the final outcome of the American Revolution, and may have been able to change the course of the war.
III. Clincher: Without the help of the Culper Spy Ring, the colonies might well not have won the Revolutionary War, and the United States as we know it would not exist.

Bibliography
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Discover Long Island NY. “The Culper Spy Ring: Path through History.” Online video. YouTube. YouTube, 30 Mar. 2015. Web. 30 Mar. 2016.
GEORGE DEWAN, STAFF W. "LONG ISLAND: OUR STORY / A Ruse Saves the French Fleet / the Culper Spy Ring Foils the British by Delivering Critical Information to Washington." Newsday, Combined editions ed.: A15. 19 Jan. 1998. ProQuest. Web. 30 Mar. 2016.
Kilmeade, Brian, and Don Yaeger. “George Washington's Secret Six: The Spy Ring That Saved the American Revolution.” Penguin Group, 2013.

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