Comparison Of Poems 'Marks And Baseball' By Linda Pastan

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Life is a journey. It is filled with challenges, lessons learned, happiness, and celebrations. Everyone experiences the twists and turns that life can throw, but some do not experience it as Linda Pastan did during the women’s movement. She expresses her feeling of “life” in her poem “Marks” and “Baseball. Both of these poems portray the use of extended metaphors to set the theme of her poems and are similar in comparing two distinct things to life, but in different ways.
Linda Pastan was a great poet while also a wife and mother. She “suspended her writing for a decade while raising her three children” (Potvin 2). Pastan stated in an interview with Jeffery Brown that she stopped because she could not be the perfect wife and mother that were …show more content…

The structure of “Baseball” and “Marks” are very different, but their two distinct structures tend to prove the same meaning. “Marks” is a poem consisting of three stanzas with three lines in the first, five lines in the second and four lines in the third. This poem has three groups of four lines, in which each family member has their own group of lines. One unique thing is that the husband’s last line runs into the second stanza. Pastan does this to make it clear that her husband grades her on her intimate abilities and only gives her a B plus. “Baseball” on the other hand consists of seven short two lined stanzas and is also written in free verse. Again Pastan could have chosen to write this poem in seven short two lined stanzas because a little league baseball game is played in seven innings with each team hitting and playing the field once and each inning. This structure is unique in portraying the game baseball. Each poem has its own way of expressing the use of a metaphor, because one deals with a historical event and another is just Pastan’s thoughts about life. These poems are not only different in structure both include informal diction, alliteration, and distinct world choices to convey the meaning of the extended metaphor in each

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