Comparison Of Brokeback Mountain Short Story

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In both short story and film, the versions of Ennis and Jack are pretty much the same. However, many other characters in the short story that are merely mentioned in passing, for example, Ennis’ daughters, but also the two protagonists’ wives, play bigger parts and are developed further as characters in the film. Especially Jack’s wife Lureen and their family life are barely ever mentioned in the short story. In the film, on the other hand, Lureen’s character is developed into a more substantial part in the film. From the moment that she and Jack first meet, to Thanksgiving dinner with her side of the family, to the moment Ennis calls her on the phone to get information about Jack’s death, Lureen stands up more than what she is when compares …show more content…

The short story has a type of framed narrative where we meet Ennis in the future; the introductory paragraph is set in italics and tells the reader how Ennis has just woken up and had a dream about Jack. When the non-italicized part of the text starts, the reader is transported back to the men’s childhood years and told how they first met. When the entire story of “Brokeback Mountain” comes to an end, in an almost exclusively chronological order, the last two paragraphs of the text come as a natural summarization, but they also function as a look ahead on what Ennis’ life will be like in the future. It is described how Jack began to appear in Ennis’ dreams after Ennis went to see Jack’s parents and how Ennis sometimes wakes up grief-stricken and sometimes with a sense of joy. Above all, it links back to a comment made by Ennis directed to Jack earlier in the short story.In the screenplay, on the other hand, there is no framed narrative. As mentioned above, the movie begins with a cattle truck coming down the road; Ennis’ ride to go looking for work with “Farm and Ranch Employment.” The final scene of the film is where Ennis’ oldest daughter has come to see her father and when she leaves Ennis realizes she has forgotten her …show more content…

A shift in medium requires changes to be made in the text that is going to be adapted. In the case of Brokeback Mountain, something that is clearly in need of change is the length of the manuscript. In order for it to become a full feature-length film elements have to be added. The director has done so by expanding the characters and making the plot more complex than in the short story. In Proulx’s text, it is Ennis’ and Jack’s relationship that is in focus; everything going on around them is of lesser importance. In the film, on the other hand, Ennis’ and Jack’s families are also included in the main storyline. As discussed in the section above, it is obvious that changes have been made. Elements have both been added as well as subtracted. I enjoyed the greater focus on the relationship between Ennis and his elder daughter, Alma Junior (only in the film’s version). There is a particularly touching scene not included in the book when as a child she asks to be able to live with him rather than her mother after their divorce. However, Ennis refuses,

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