Comparing Poems 'Still I Rise And An Unknown Girl'

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Both authors present the theme of identity in different ways. For example, in ‘Still I Rise’ the speaker is conveying that she is very much confident with her identity and that she has a strong sense of who she is as she fights back against the oppression of blacks in America, however in ‘An Unknown Girl’, the poem follows a speaker who is having her hand hennaed by a girl who is unknown to the reader in an Indian bazaar whilst she is trying to connect with her Indian roots and appears alienated as she desperately wants to join the culture. The fact that Moniza Alvi is determined, almost desperate to become a member of the community is shown in her line, ‘I am clinging to these firm peacock lines like people who cling to the sides of a train.’ …show more content…

This is shown in the line ‘I have new brown veins.’ The use of the adjective ‘new’ shows that the culture has changed her for the better and that she has become a completely new person. Likewise, the fact that the speaker has new ‘veins’ is significant as it shows the permanence of her new cultural identity and the use of the full stop at the end of the line shows how definitive she is about her cultural shift. This is also shown as the speaker writes that she will ‘lean across a country with [her] arms outstretched for the unknown girl in the neon bazaar.’ The fact that the speaker will ‘lean across a country’ shows how warmly she will welcome her culture into her life and how she is so determined to become a member of the culture with her new-found …show more content…

“Out of the huts of history’s shame… up from a past that’s rooted in pain”. The alliteration of the letter ‘h’ in ‘out of the huts of history’s shame’ makes the line seem as though it is hard to say, yet again alluding to her roots as slaves were often made to work until they collapsed and physically couldn’t work anymore. The sibilance at the end of ‘history’s shame’ gives the end of the line a harsh feel and gives it a bitter taste, which highlights the persona’s bitterness towards the mistreatment of her ancestors. Furthermore, the use of the plosives ‘past’ and ‘pain’ set an angry tone of passion, conflict and violence, as if she is fighting against her oppressors. The stanza is similar to a chant that shows strength and unity. This is, however contradicted by the verse’s meter, which is uneven. This may show the persona’s struggle with

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