Comparing Poems 'Adonais And John Keats' Lycidas

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Adonais is a pastoral elegy, which Shelley wrote on the death of his contemporary poet John Keats. Like Miltons “Lycidas,” wrote on his friend Edward King. John Milton adapted the classical form of elegy perfected by poets during the Greek times while Shelley did, too, write in the classical pattern although she adapted and added some of the elements. Both of these poems are great to me because they have brought out quiet emotion out of me, and I have learned that feeling is what a good written should partake. But now the question is, are these poems meeting Longinus sublime criteria? Longinus talks about what good writing is and how it can be achieved, and the sublime is the principal element. The sublime is “a certain distinction and excellence in expression” (Longinus 114) meaning it must have an elevated language that is like a spell over the audience that transports them to the more than they can imagine but at the …show more content…

–Thou young Dawn, / Turn all thy dew to splendor, for from thee / The spirit thou lamentest is not gone;” (Adonais 108). In these few verses he is talking about Adonais being alive and how great it is to have it back and the wonderfulness of the world. At the beginning both of these poets are weeping for their beloved friends. This brings the audience to feel the pain that they are both feeling when this is happening. They do this by asking rhetorical questions. Milton in “Lycidas” says “Ay me, I fondly dream! / Had ye been there, for what could that have done?” (56-57). At this point the speaker is still trying to come into the cruel fact that Lycidas’ is really dead. He realizes that he shouldn’t be blaming the nymphs, its just as fantasizing. It seems that he is thinking that what they wouldn’t have been able to do anything even if they were there. Shelley also asks many rhetorical questions in regards to his

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