Comparing For My Daughter 'And Rite Of Passage' By Weldon Kees

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“Title” Although the world today seems completely corrupt at times, some happiness and hope can be found when one is determined enough. Even in the middle of the worst day ever most humans manage to smile at least once in that day. However, in the two poems “For My Daughter” by Weldon Kees and “Rite of Passage” by Sharon Olds the speakers are both quite acceptant that there is no hope for a good life in this world. In these poems the speakers are parents concerned that their children are doomed to live a life of war and hurt. The authors of these poems relay a theme that even the most innocent of children will eventually be tainted by the villainous ways of society. Obviously, anyone considering having children becomes exceptionally consumed with the “what if’s” that could follow bringing a child into the world. Throughout the poem, “ For My Daughter” Weldon Kees continuously describes all that could go wrong in his potential daughter’s life, “Death in certain war, the slim legs green/Or, fed on hate, she relishes the sting/Of others’ agony; perhaps the cruel/ Bride of a syphilitic or a fool” (Kees lines 9-12). It is very …show more content…

Both authors create this theme that all good ultimately turns to bad due to the malicious nature of the world. In “For My Daughter” the speaker deeply fears having a daughter that becomes wrathful and hateful, he writes, “Or, fed on hate, she relishes the sting/ Of others’ agony; perhaps the cruel” (Kees lines 10-11). In the poem “Rite of Passage” the speaker does not necessarily fear what her son could become but does recognize the beastly nature of war, “men agree, they clear their throats/ like Generals, they relax and get down to/playing war, celebrating my son’s life”(Olds lines 24-26). Ultimately, both authors have a similar theme that war wages on and there is no shelter for children in such a cruel

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