Better For America Essay

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Cole Do you think America could be better? because think it could be much better. The main reasons I think America could be better are, in this country there are more murders than any other country, here there are more gun exports than anywhere else, and our educational system is lacking. In the next paragraph I will go further in depth with these reasons. This is why I think America could be better and you should to. The murder rate is higher than any other country for every 100,000 people is the US around 3.5 people get killed every year. The the next country is chile for every 100,000 people around 2.5 people get killed. and there is 318.9 million people in the US alone that’s around 911 people a year that more than any other country. …show more content…

The chances of our guns getting to their real destination so most likely all the people we fight use our guns. The most recent guns we exported got stolen and never made it to their destination. We did not get any money and terrorist got a lot of guns. So when we fight our men get killed with guns we made. The kids in america's school system could use a tune up couldn’t it. The major flaw with the school system is not letting the students try as hard as they can in the subjects they think they're good at. The second biggest flaw is not teaching them how to do taxes or pay bills or write checks. The third biggest flaw is teaching us useless things like how many chromosomes are in a plant. In what cases is knowing how many chromosomes are in a plant going to be useful besides if you're a herbologist. For these reasons I think that america could be better, but with changes america could be the best country. Such as making it harder to pin point the weapon transfers. Letting students choose to something harder or letting them stay with what is required of them. The death rate it can be changed, but if people keep trying to make it harder to get guns and keep them the only people with guns are the bad

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