College Admission Essay

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Admission Essay I have always been someone that is afraid to fail. From such an early age as I can remember I didn’t like to be the loser in games or get questions wrong on my school work. To me failure meant that you weren’t good enough. My parents never really taught me otherwise. I don’t think my parents really felt that they had to go over failure with me even through college. I encountered many coaches throughout my soccer career and I was always the outstanding player on the team. I was used to winning, winning in games and in the classrooms. I had a terrific freshmen year in college making only A’s and B’s on my report card. I even beat the goal record in soccer without even being aware. I made a lot of friends very quick and I loved …show more content…

I remember how my coach pulled me to the side in the hall one day to speak to me. He told me “Star if you keep things up at the rate that you are, you can really accomplish a lot your senior year. You will be no doubt in my mind the top goal scorer in the state if you make a minimum of goals you did your freshmen year.” The excitement was tremendous and my accomplishment in both school and soccer motivated me. My confidence was over the roof and I can still remember the drive I had that year. I wanted nothing more than to graduate high school and head straight to college to play soccer and get my …show more content…

I remember going into a state of depression and keeping my emotions to myself. Nobody knew how I was feeling and I didn’t want to tell people, because I didn’t want their petty. I wasn’t really trying to be the A and B student that I always pushed myself to be. I was making C’s in my classes and barely maintaining the only B I had in English class. This is the point in my life where I experienced failure. I failed my parents, myself, peers, and teammates. I let one bad situation impact my entire surroundings. I lost some friends and myself through everything. I remember my parents telling me that they were worried about me and that I needed to see the positives in my

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