Coco Puff's World War I And Its Effect On Poetry

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Coco Puff’s World War I and its Effect on Poetry asserts that World War I caused some authors to follow tradition, but those that still followed tradition would alter it to their likings. The literature review covers the point of views of different authors on why they broke strict traditionalism, but it also introduces Kipling’s works, Eliot’s works, and Pound’s works into the paper. In addition to introducing poets, it gives an argument that says mental instability and not the destruction of war caused the shift in poetry from tradition. In order to give background and reason for their break from tradition, a brief biography of Kipling, Eliot, Pound, and Frost are told. As the essay progresses, the mental instability or destruction of the …show more content…

Puff’s thesis states that “some writers […] followed tradition but put their own twist on it” is not only very broad, but it is also unarguable (1). In the end, yes, some writers will follow tradition and change it to make it theirs with some not; they have to fall into either category. The main issue I have with the thesis is that it says “some”; it essentially cuts off any counter arguments by being non-committal. Although I agree with the thesis, the paper did not convince me because it is only logical to agree. Also, the paper is not consistent with its content: it shifts focus during the literature review. The thesis is that some writers would follow tradition, but put their own personal touches to it. However, near the end of the literature review, the argument is made that “the shift actually came from the mental instabilities of the writers or poets” (Puff 2). Clearly, this argument has nothing to do with the presented thesis. Essentially, the paper argued a point that the thesis did not even bring up. On a more positive note, the thesis was indeed supported by the stories of each author’s life. In addition, Puff presented an enormous amount of poetry to analyze. Technically, the paper had many fragments and missing words in sentences. Furthermore, it even lacked a works cited page. Perhaps the paper was rushed, so it did not reach its full potential. In the end, the paper’s

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