Chick Soda Rhetorical Analysis

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Walking through the door of Mrs. Saxton’s room in the beginning of September is like walking into a sauna on the sun. Waves of unbearable heat roll through the room and despite the efforts by the numerous amounts of fans, nothing can cool the occupants. Children and Mrs. Saxton alike despise the palpable warmth. It was this universal knowledge and shared disgust of the environment that gave us our inspiration for our pop: Chill soda. As we went through early drafts and ideas for our product, we wanted to come up with something that everyone could relate to, and Mrs. Saxton’s hot, sticky classroom seemed like the common ground we were looking for. Our thought was to create a product that would relate to the kids’ struggles and remove these troubles from our consumers. Thus, the idea for Chill was born. The main form of rhetoric we used was ethos- the idea of common ground and relatability with our focus group. Despite the lack …show more content…

In the culminating vote on which beverage they would buy, only four of the thirty-one in the focus group voted for Chill soda. This placed our product fourth out of the ten competing pops. In the individual categories, our product didn’t fare much better- Chill was tied for third overall in label design, fourth overall in social media interaction, and tied for sixth overall in best advertisements. Based on the data, our product was not taken too badly, however it was not on par with what we were hoping for. Even in the written responses to our product, we received only a few negative forms of feedback from the focus group. However, these mostly positive reactions to Chill didn’t seem to translate into the votes we needed overall. It seemed that some of the other competing brands caught the eyes of the freshmen focus group more, like Bae of Waves or Madapple. After analyzing the data there are clearly some things we could have done better, in order to obtain more

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