Bruce Dawe Essay

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For centuries, war has broken families and caused scarring both physical and mental. Consequently, the futility of war has been universally accepted and Bruce Dawes powerful poems ‘Weapons Training’ and ‘Homecoming’ reveal this. Dawe creates an Australian insight to the training and consequences of the Vietnam War. The Vietnam War was a long conflict Beginning in 1954 and ending in 1975. More than 3 million people were killed in the tragic War. Dawes ‘Weapons Training’ demonstrates the guidance of an abusive Sergeant whilst ‘Homecoming’ illustrates the shocking consequences and impact of war. Bruce Dawes powerful war poems, paired together, showcase a journey. One filled with harsh and vulgar training whilst the other proves that even training …show more content…

The poem appears to be torrent of abuse and vulgarity; however, it is ultimately an instructional guideline on how to survive the foreign conflict. The drill sergeants stern tone is instantly viewed when the audience is introduced to his monologue mid sentence, “And when I say eyes right I want to hear/ those eyeballs click and the gentle pitter-patter/ of falling dandruff”. Beginning mid sentence effectively allows the audience to feel as if they have just walked in on the intimidating speech instantly grabbing the audience’s attention. The sergeant displays his authoritative nature through the hyperbole of how quick he wants his soldiers to pay attention. The silence immediately required to follow, expressed through the silent-like onomatopoeia ‘pitter patter’, allows the audience to anticipate extremely important information to follow. This fast paced …show more content…

The powerful poem ‘Weapons Training’ showcases a sergeant, through malicious words, guiding his troops. However it is through ‘Homecoming’, where Dawe exposes the brutal hopelessness brought forth by the futility of war. Therefore it can be seen that war has an emotional toll on both families and the soldiers. Both poems have a recurring message that all war does is bring loss, death and mourning, showcasing Dawes strong opinions about a futile

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