Birthmarked, Caragh O Brien: An Analysis

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Corruption: dishonest or fraudulent conduct by those in power. Corruption is everywhere. It is known to have adverse effects on the development of society through creating the feeling of unrest throughout the population. In the dystopian themed novel, Birthmarked, Caragh O'Brien explores the possibility of an oppressive government system by combining the thirst for power and control, with its effects on society. The government system in the novel Birthmarked is corrupt, as it gains its power by using surveillance, forced conformity, and threatening punishments. This impacts the functionality of the society by creating the possibility of rebellion. To begin, the Protectorat constantly monitors the people that he reigns over, and if they found …show more content…

Towards the end of chapter fifteen, Gaia realizes that the Protectorat has been watching her close friends, and has the potential to harm them at any given moment. In this particular scene, she is watching the aftermath of the Protectorat almost shooting and killing a baby, Gaia observes, “The camera view zoomed out, shrinking the image of the parents, who running with their baby as fast as possible back toward the houses of Wharfton” (O'Brien 177). This quote exhibits the sheer power that the Protecterat has, and how he uses it as a weapon. This is an example of a corrupt government, since the privacy of the citizens is violated and their personal information such as their location, is used as a potential weapon. Moreover, the surveillance is used as blackmail to get prisoners to abide the parameters of the various threats. Not only has the government weaponized a tool that should be used for good, but they also use it to blackmail and negative reinforcement increases the chances of rebellion. When Gaia was in the Protectorat’s office, she was desperate to see her mother, and the Protectorat knew that. He toys with her emotions by saying, “‘Perhaps,” he …show more content…

When Gaia is making her plans to get inside of the Enclave, she is told, “‘Dress in red’” (O’Brien 48). Red is the colour that servants and maids are forced to wear and Gaia is hit with a wave of realization that everyone is forced to dress and act a certain way. This forces the citizens to judge others based on their persona, not their personality, making them more on edge and more fearful of their own people. This further develops their conformity because everyone does the exact same thing when they meet someone new: make assumptions. Continuing on, the citizens are also pressured into speaking the same way too. Methodically, all of the citizens start and end their conversations with the saying, “‘I serve the Enclave,’ she said. ‘And I,’ the two guards answered in unison’” (O’Brien 41). All of the people who live in or around the Enclave repeatedly say that they are happy to serve the enclave, and if they refuse to say that, they could be arrested on the grounds of treason. This forces them to live under constant fear of being taken away from their loved ones, and if they break under the pressure, it could cause a ripple effect and cause them all to rebel. This further proves that this is a corrupt government because it does not let the people express their opinions, therefore violating act one of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights. To summarize, the government

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