Batting Clean-Up And Striking Out Analysis

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The essays “Neat People vs Sloppy People” by Suzanne Britt and “Batting Clean-Up and Striking out” by David Berry take a whole new look on the dreaded aspects of cleaning. Britt expresses the different lifestyles of sloppy people to the infamous neat people. While Berry takes gender roles and compares them side by side in order to see the differences between how male/females clean. Both authors illustrate distinct differences and similarities between certain personalities that result in different lifestyles and priorities. Both Britt and Berry express the characteristics that come with these different personalities using humor and exaggeration but, Britt shows bias towards sloppy people while Berry treats both genders with fairness. “Neat …show more content…

Barry uses a humorous tone to show the different subjects that make men and women totally forget their surroundings and focus solely on that subject alone. Barry humoredly describes a woman’s view on cleaning that results in a light hearted subject matter: “I just windexed...and she is seeing dirt everywhere” (Barry 249)! The purpose of using humor in this essay is to point out the foolishness of mankind in a gentle way. Barry takes a perfectly ordinary situation and uses exaggeration in order to make his point very clear. From the very first sentence Berry uses exaggeration by stating “women can see extremely small quantities of dirt… at the level of molecules” (Berry 248). Similarly Barry goes further talking about men's’ infatuation with sports which Barry exaggerates by saying “[he] could feel the World Series television and radio broadcast rays zinging through the air, penetrating right into [his] body, causing [his] dental fillings to vibrate” (Berry 250). The reader senses Berry’s exaggeration since it is impossible for a human to see at the level of molecules and for sports to cause dental fillings to vibrate. Throughout the essay, Berry is unbiased and expresses both men and women fairly. Berry anticipates an objection and states he gets “letters from women… sensitive to sports to the point where they could crush [his] skull like a ripe grape, but [he] feels these women are the exception” (Berry 249). He also describes men in a negative light since they cannot see dirt is why “to this very day, men tend to do extremely little in the way of useful housework” (Barry 249). Barry goes back and forth describing men and women in both negative and positive ways. However, he does this in a fair and honest

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