John Clare's An Invite To Eternity

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Audience and Expectation in John Clare’s An Invite to Eternity

Although John Clare’s “An Invite to Eternity” appears to be a direct address to an unknown and anonymous “maiden,” in reality the poem is a much more complex appeal to the reader, which takes on the guise of traditional love poetry only to subvert it. In many ways, Clare’s poem seems to emulate and echo more classical poems such as Marlowe’s “The Passionate Shepherd to His Love” in its direct entreaty to a young lover. However, unlike that earlier poem, Clare’s offers his “sweet maid” a less than appealing prospect for future life, presenting her with an “eternity” filled with apocalyptic landscapes and almost monumental human disconnection. Indeed, the very vision of eternity …show more content…

Even in this very opening there are clues that what follows may not completely be what it seems because of the use of antiquated word forms, seemingly out of place in a poem by a self-taught, peasant poet: “Wilt thou go with me sweet maid / Say maiden wilt thou go with me” (1-2). Words like “wilt” and “thou” connect the poem more firmly back to classical tradition and poems such as Marlowe’s “Passionate Shepherd to His Love” which begins in a similar vein (an entreaty to “come with me and be my love” (1)), but interestingly does not make such use of antique language. However, Clare’s use of this language clearly places his poem in a classical, traditional vein, an expectation disrupted by the following description the land he wishes the maiden to accompany him to, a place “of night and dark obscurity / Where the sun forgets the day / Where there’s nor life nor light to see” (4-7). A far cry from the “pleasures” of “valleys, groves, hills and fields” of Marlowe’s pastoral poem (2-3), “An Invite to Eternity” rejects the expectations its first two lines promise, exchanging the anticipated and conventional world of the romantic pastoral or the heavenly for the decidedly hellish and ominous. The stanza closes with an echo of the first lines – “Sweet maiden wilt thou go with me” – seeming perverse and almost ironic in the face of the world described in the lines previous …show more content…

This return to the conventions of love poetry, the happy ending and consummation, adds a parting shot of additional irony to the poem as a whole, for the future life we have seen for this couple is less than pleasant. Indeed, this ending, more clearly than any other part of the poem, directly mocks the notion of romantic and eternal love as traditionally presented by poetry and expresses Clare’s own bitterness and anger at his isolation from the world and from human love.

Throughout “An Invite to Eternity,” Clare invokes the traditions of love poetry, only to subvert these conventions, mocking the notions of love and eternity with sad irony and the truth of his own social isolation. The descriptions of the world he occupies are hardly appealing and Clare is well aware of this, knowing that such an offer would be made in vain if truly made at all. The straightforwardly presented horror of Clare’s world lies in direct contrast to the world of love he continually invokes, and the improbable triumph of love over isolation is nearly laughable in its impossibility. By complicating his poem’s mode of transmission through the filter of the maid and the frame of traditional love poetry, Clare’s portrait of isolation and social death becomes even more moving and poignant, for it is just as obvious to the reader as it is to Clare that such an offer of “eternity” would be unlikely to be accepted. And if it were, would it matter in an eternity where

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