Animal Captivity Rhetorical Analysis

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The keys idea of this was animal captivity which is at peak publicity with many individuals and group revolting against the treatment of animals in zoos who belong in the wild. People often visits zoos and just enjoy the animals without giving much thought to where they came from and who they belong to. Some animals are taken from their natural habitat and put in environments that are different to their previous surroundings. Although zoos do their best to provide for the animals, I wanted to write from the point of view of the giraffe as he moves from his home and loses part of his family. In modern day, money is often the main consideration in animals, therefore their wellbeing is often ignored if money can be generated at their expense. …show more content…

One of the main techniques used was rhetorical questions. I included this to emphasize the confusion the giraffe is feeling and to get the audience thinking more comprehensively about animal captivity. Some examples of this is “Where the heck am I?” and “But how do I do that?” Most people simply admire the animals without giving much thought to what those seemingly happy animals are going through. Especially a species such as the giraffe, which has such a graceful and peaceful presence. Another technique used was imagery to allow the audience to feel like they really understood what the giraffe and his family were facing. One of the main lines that illustrated this was “There’s jagged, ridged and charcoal fences surrounding me and chubby and flushed faces attached to short necks gawking at me.” The detail of this sentence allows the audience to create a vivid picture in their mind and possible see what it is like on the other side of the …show more content…

For example in the line “I mean, have you seen how tall I am!”. This makes the piece more inclusive and makes the audience feel as if they are in the story. It also helps to engage the reader and gives it a more friendly and inviting tone. Metaphors are also present in the line “That was a very long dry season” which refers to the wife's pregnancy. This compares the dry season of Africa to the lack of intimacy between the couple and the emotional implications it has on the husband. Another metaphor was in the line “flooded our hearts” which emphasis the happiness the giraffe is feeling. This is further supported by the oxymoron “brisk blush” which follows the metaphor. An oxymoron is combination of two contradictory terms. This increases the complexity of the narrative and adds intensity as it doesn’t state the obvious. Idioms which are phrases that have a hidden meaning different to the literal meaning of the phrase were another technique used in the piece. It was used specifically in the line “batten down the hatches”. This means to prepare yourself for danger of harm as if you were a ship preparing for a storm. This expresses how the giraffe is feeling a quicker and more engaging

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