Analysis of Samuel Taylor Coleridge's The Pains of Sleep

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Throughout the beginning of the poem there are religious undertones Coleridge uses words like bended knee and reverential to highlight a religious belief and perhaps a plea to God to cure the “Pains of Sleep” this is interesting as he seems to feel “humbled” by the spirit presence. He mentions being weak but realises he is blest by this power. The religious undertone suggests to me a feeling of utter helplessness.

There is a rhythm throughout the poem with strong rhyme, this pattern is like heavy breathing you have when you try to go to sleep it could also represent the rhythmical counting of sheep.

There is alliteration of the ‘s’ sound this sounds like snoring and again follows the gentle rhythmic pattern and also the words silently and slow are linked because they are indirectly describing the body’s state whilst asleep.

The poem is written in iambic pentameter with a clearly defined rhyme scheme throughout, although there are some variations

Coleridge uses the word no twice in line 8 which emphasises the fact that there is no way out, no whispers, no thought, just despair and a lack of control.

Throughout the poem there are clearly defined rhyme changes, the poem goes backwards and forwards from aabb to abab.

The fact that there the poem has no stanza divides represents the long and painful road to sleep and the never ending fight with insomnia.

At the end of lines 20, 22, 25 and 26 there are exclamation marks which shown strength and a fight, the transition from the first part of the poem to the second is defined by the introduction of a theme of desire, passion and fear all of which are interlinked in religious teachings but the poem is using the good parts of religion and then quickly switches to the...

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...ore alert and aware of the discomfort and it is more bumpy in the way you read it

First impression - about a fight to get to sleep (metaphor) MOOD- a plea combined with a fight and a struggle all things un-holy. OVERALL OBSERVATIONS- it spans a few nights sleep and the difficulty of them. The second part seems to be more of a life issue. He is perhaps questioning the way he has lived his life or is living his life and he he is scared and ashamed of what he see’s in his life.

In the third part he has awoken from a ‘fiendish’ dream by screaming and he cries once he stops crying he feels less anguish and admit’s the punishment was due.he says how he is suffering a hell within and he hates what he’s doing but still wants to do it. He ends the poem saying the only thing that will help him escape the nightmare is to be loved by someone and to really love them back.

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