Analysis Of For Colored Girls By Ntozake Shange

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At the beginning of the year, a question which was brought up in class: “What is freedom and how would you define it?” I remember that I wrote down something along the lines of freedom is the ability to make choices for yourself. For the past few weeks, listening to, reading, and discussing “For Colored Girls” made me realize that what I knew as freedom as a well off male was completely different than the protagonists’ perception of freedom. In the text “For Colored Girls”, Ntozake Shange tackles the struggles of African American women through a choreopoem that follows the life stories of seven African American women dressed in different colors. The format of a choreopoem gives Shange a unique way to weave in the stories and general issues …show more content…

From the diction and syntax to the metaphors and imagery to the voice and point of view, everything written in “For Colored Girls” is distinctly different from traditional literature. Shange has her signature phonetic spellings - enuf for enough, wd for would, cd for could, waz for was - which places value on the language that people like the ladies in the book use. Shange writes more like how black women would talk in real life, with improper grammar and lots of fragments: “when i discovered archie shepp / doncha know i wore out the magic of juju / heroically resistin being possessed / oooooooooooh the sounds / sneakin in under age to slug’s / to stare ata real ‘artiste’ / & every word outta imamu’s mouth was gospel / & if jesus cdnt play a horn like shepp / waznt no need for colored folks to bear no cross at all”(12-13). The rules which Shange writes with is completely different than traditional, white literature, and the ideas and issues which Shange writes about is completely different from white literature. In the quote above, the lady in the blue is recalling dancing to traditional African music played by African American artists. The realistic diction and free flowing syntax allows the ladies to express a genuine and more compelling voice. Shange is also not shy to use metaphors and imagery as well: “Tubes tables white washed windows | grime from age wiped over once | legs spread | anxious | eyes crawling up on me | eyes rollin in my thighs | metal horses gnawin my womb”. (22) This vivid description of an abortion adds more to the genuineness of the issues that black women face. Instead of having a bland narrator describe something like an abortion regularly, Shange gives the lady in the blue the freedom to describe the abortion with passion and emotion, using a detailed metaphor. The point of view of Shange’s characters are strong enough that

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