A Rhetorical Analysis Of Why Competition By Alfie Kohn

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In the article, “Why Competition” by Alfie Kohn, the author thought to be the country’s most outspoken critic of education discusses the negative effects of competition, he claims competition by its very nature is always unhealthy. To corroborate his claims Kohn displays a variety of information. First, Kohn discusses the transformation that takes place when people compete in group activities, he explains that individuals will turn into team members and possess an attitude of win at all costs. He expands on this idea and discusses the negative impact that has on us; exclusion, hostility and violence, and the need to be better than. He then moves on to discuss the ethical issues of competition and how it leads us to lie and fabricate evidence, …show more content…

Competition with others can cause us as individuals to want to better ourselves and make us strive to improve positively. It allows us to assess what we can change and develop in education and or experience. My colleague Hailey La Fave comments, “ I’m constantly trying to better others and their venues trying to get people to come to mine. This to me, is positive, because everyday I'm trying to better myself with my promoting and helping the venue grow. So my competition results in better sales and bigger shows.” In making this comment, Hailey points out that the competition she feels within her job positively affects her and gives her the drive to improve business for herself and her co-workers. Therefore, because she feels compelled to help draw in more business and make more profit she feels self satisfaction within herself when the company does well. Not only does Hailey’s personal experience illustrate the improvement that can occur within ourselves from competition, so does this quote from Empowher magazine, the journalist Darlene Oakley states, “Wayne Gretzky, Steve Jobs, and Nelson Mandela didn’t become the best at what they did or achieve what they did by staying the same. They worked, and strove, and experienced failure and setbacks many times before becoming the people we now revere them for being.” Darlene is saying here, that empowering people of our nation haven’t made self progress by allowing their faults to stop them but in fact allowing it to help them become the people they are recognized as today and will be for the rest of time. Because of their struggles and feats with competition they have found ways to improve themselves and make contributions to the world. In conclusion, by the motivation from competitors both Hailey, and the influential men have made personal accomplishments and strive to

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