Comparative Essay: Tocqueville vs. Ortiz Cofer

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In the essay “How the Americans Understand the Equality of the Sexes” written by Alexis de Tocqueville and the personal narrative “The Story of My Body” written by Judith Ortiz Cofer, both authors compare some social values from their hometown to those of America. In his essay, the European author Alexis de Tocqueville goes to America to examine the social position of American women and compares the equality of sexes between the two countries. From his observation, he concludes that unlike the status of women in Europe, American women are morally and intellectually equal as men despite the difference of their gender roles. His target audience may probably be some elder people since young readers may find his assumptions antiquated as his essay has been written for nearly two centuries. Similarly, in “The Story of My Body,” Ortiz Cofer, who is born in Puerto Rico, describes how people see her differently when she moves from Puerto Rico to America. She subdivides her personal story into four sections: “Skin,” “Color,” “Size,” and “Looks” to clearly narrate her personal experiences. Ortiz Cofer’s story makes connection with a diversity of readers as many of the readers probably have some similar experiences like hers. Although both authors use comparison as strategy, Ortiz Cofer is more successful in drawing readers’ attention and convincing them of her point of views through her personal narrative, while Tocqueville’s use of his observation without legitimate evidence is less successful in persuading readers of his position.

Throughout his essay “How the Americans Understand the Equality of the Sexes,” Tocqueville compares the women’s status of European to that of American. For example, to emphasize the roles of American women in ...

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...mparisons to effectively convey their messages to readers, Ortiz Cofer is more successful in persuading readers of her arguments and drawing readers’ attention by narrating her wide variety of experiences vividly. On the other hand, Tocqueville’s antiquated ideas and his use of observation to support his arguments fail to convince readers of his points and attract attention.

Works Cited

De Tocqueville, Alexis. “How the Americans Understand the Equality of the

Sexes.” Rereading America: Cultural Contexts for Critical Thinking and

Writing. Ed. Gary Colombo, Robert Cullen, Bonnie Lisle. 8th ed. Boston:

Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2010. 520-523.

Ortiz Cofer, Judith. “Thy Story of My Body.” Rereading America: Cultural

Contexts for Critical Thinking and Writing. Ed. Gary Colombo, Robert

Cullen, Bonnie Lisle. 8th ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2010. 537-545.

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